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Todd's avatar

I really like the concept that a time jump might include things you are thinking at that exact moment!

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Anthony Lora's avatar

On both reads I did of this chapter, I really enjoyed how we go from something firmly grounded in reality (Waterloo) to the absurd. I love the concept of SLAYBIB and off-brand Pepe Le Pew!

And of course, it's exciting to see Joey breaking away. Can't help but cheer him on as he tries to work the time travel shenanigans out on his own. You said elsewhere you wanted to give him more agency here and you definitely made that happen, nice work!

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