On both reads I did of this chapter, I really enjoyed how we go from something firmly grounded in reality (Waterloo) to the absurd. I love the concept of SLAYBIB and off-brand Pepe Le Pew!
And of course, it's exciting to see Joey breaking away. Can't help but cheer him on as he tries to work the time travel shenanigans out on his own. You said elsewhere you wanted to give him more agency here and you definitely made that happen, nice work!
I really like the concept that a time jump might include things you are thinking at that exact moment!
On both reads I did of this chapter, I really enjoyed how we go from something firmly grounded in reality (Waterloo) to the absurd. I love the concept of SLAYBIB and off-brand Pepe Le Pew!
And of course, it's exciting to see Joey breaking away. Can't help but cheer him on as he tries to work the time travel shenanigans out on his own. You said elsewhere you wanted to give him more agency here and you definitely made that happen, nice work!
You've got a knack for punchy prose. Great job!
It’s a crazy multiverse out there for time/multiverse travelers. Go Joey!
Bravo! Well done. I like how you brought back some of the absurd bits from the early chapters. And I really can't wait to see what happens next!